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| (2005-03-29 오후 2:36:31, Hit 1176) |
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[번역지식] 자기소개서-예제로 본 영문 자기소개서 쓰기(2) |
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<오류예문>
It gives me a pleasure to apply for join to your visiting scholar program. I have been thinking about this chance since I began to lecture by english at university. I would like to provide you with the following information about my backgound and study objectives.
I was born as a second child in my family. I have my parents, andtwo brother. Especially my parents have been very generous to me because only one daughter. My father is a soldier and My mother is a nurse.
Sometimes, I miss mom that pray for the children early in the morning. She has always given encourgement instead of punishment to me. Ilike and admire my mom, because she has had very positive thinking.Also, I don't forget telling me to work hard in my life. She alwaystells me to be self-actualization in my life. I used to remember when she took the Master's degree at the 50 ages. That is the pricelesslesson that I always keep in mind.
<교정>
It gives me a pleasure to apply for your visiting scholar program.I have been thinking about this chance since I began to lecture in English at university. I would like to provide you with the followinginformation about my background and study objectives. I was born as a second child in my family. I have my parents, and two brothers. Especially, my parents have been very generous to me because I am their only daughter. My father is a soldier and m y mother is a nurse. (화목한 가정이라는 말을 첨가하면좋겠습니다.)
Sometimes, I miss mom who prays for the children early in the morning. She has always given encouragement instead of punishment to me. I like and admire my mom because she has had very positive thinking. Also, I don’t forget telling meto work hard in my life. She always tells me to be self-actualization in my life. I used to remember when she took the m aster’s degree at her early 50s . That is the priceless lesson that I always keep in mind. (어머니의 행실에 대한 존경뿐만 아니라 그것을 본받아 자신이 어떻게 변했는지를 써야합니다.)
출처: 코리아 타임즈 (주) 에버케이션 |
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